They Peered Into The Darkness Comments

I thoroughly enjoyed this one Danny. There is an air about this piece which makes one feel they've entered another outer worldly place. I cannot explain fully just my first reaction... I love how it reads the world in comparison to a humans development. Initially the innocence and purity of a young child gazing innocence in wonderment but by the end it seems as an old person reminiscing. I do hope you get what on earth I'm on about lol. Never to good at expressing what I feel I see but you know that Danny. Loved the flow and felt totally poetic reading this.

superb, splendid and spontaneous the three s that makes this piece spectacular, a job well done sir bravo

what a beautiful poem to read, enjoy and imagine! well done!

Folklore and dogma foamed and bayed At a vastness exponentially displayed, Minds reached back and right across but earthly bound the paradox. Very true! Much remains a mystery and we continue to peer into darkness! ! A great poem with some beautiful lines! !

Beautiful Danny, very descriptive and imaginative. A great write which I enjoyed reading very much.

Dreamed amongst its stars to fly. I like it.