Tuesday, January 19, 2010

They Noticed Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was looking at all of them
Some holding hands and others saying a poem
And there she set under a big tree
Reading her book and feeling free
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Cain XXX 02 July 2010

simply awesome. the narration was excellent. it really drew out the emotions of the characters. i enjoyed it very much. thanks for sharing!

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Kesav Easwaran 20 May 2010

'Each one of them went in a different way But they didn't know that their hearts would stay' these lines constitute the soul of this love scene poem...good narration Rose...reads like cinematic dialogue...10

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Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 26 January 2010

Thanks for writing this one.. i like it.

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