Sunday, September 27, 2009

They Moved In Awe... Comments

Rating: 5.0

...amidst the ruins
silhouetted in moonlight
eyes moved in unique rhythm
to an array of tantric sculptures
...
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indira babbellapati
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Onelia Avelar 07 October 2009

one can feel that still reveberating rhythm - the words 'moved' and 'rhythm' repeated many times like an echo create some vibration

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Saadat Tahir 06 October 2009

fluid moonlight....hmmmm....like in molten silver... great imagery indraji a very nice poem, ...as usual and a lip and cup conondrum... cheers

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Obinna Eruchie 05 October 2009

Beautifully written in imagery.

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 28 September 2009

ohh, fantastic poem ma'am... the immobile set alive by inner feeling.... wonderful composition. thank you.

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Sandra Martyres 28 September 2009

An awesome write Indira...with vivid imagery

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Rakesh Bedi 27 September 2009

Nive imagery, indira.....

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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