Friday, June 10, 2016

They'll Say About Her Way... Comments

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One day when she's old and gray
they'll talk about all the ways she charmed the world with her smile,
the way she would fall asleep to an open window
listening to the melancholy sound of the evening dove.
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Mike Smith 14 June 2016

Fantastic piece. Love how the story shifts from what 'they' said to what 'she' says. Very deep piece, and very telling. It's early yet... The undertow beneath the current may still be quelled by the right tide

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Leah Ayliffe

Leah Ayliffe

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