They Give Us Pleasure Comments

A wonderful poem imbued with wit and humor. One of a kind thought cleverly crafted.

Nice realistical poem, thank you for sharing.........10+++++++

They give us pleasure they give us life Rachel Ann Butler

U r amagingly matched my egotic nuances along the lines definitely with a difference in naming them differently...

dear keshavji, i read this for the second times...to me stocks are the careless youth of the world. am i correct?

MMM, all i can say is shhhhhht..i will read this in silence..LOl A pleasure to read

Tell me you're just kidding, my friend! This is amusing!

Stocks should not be taken to seriously, their value goes up and down, sometimes they are hard to predict. Wives however should always be treated in a serious way, for their value should always remain the same. What price a happy marriage? An enjoyabel and amusing poem.

Serious yet amusing great humor... nice thoughts...status on stocks surprising comparison..haha thanks for the laugh, Sir.. 10+++++ Lovelots, Maia

hahaha! well narrated, my friend...thanks for this amazing and amusing write. brilliant! :) 10 smiles for you :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)

woman gives man pleasure and life He treat her as stocks, hold them tight As you are a banker, a broker of heart what will your wife do when she knew you love them all too Oh my.... what a life! Someone has sold his own life ............lolzzzzz kiddo! ! ! nice humour! ! !

very nice poem.good for the soul.it is joyful

a good build-up of anticipation - and then, presto! - a surprise comparison.... well-done; excellent humor - though I hope, for your sake, your spouse thinks so too...

Haha.. i was wondering what it could be.. n when u revealed what it is..ha ha.. yes a very sweet presentation...

haha, LOL, I can see the connection...for better or for worse! ....but don't let your wife read this!

well its true...written simile with zeal......10

Lively jocand tone! ! fine wording and thoughful indeed! 10+

dear keshavji, i know you are a stock analyst.......the poem is very funny, witty and absolutely poetic... if the word 'stocks' in the last line is replaced with.................then most of the readers will simply write down just this word only: Children.......

nice piece.. nice comparison and very enjoyable to read

a lovely comparison, witty...!