Sunday, October 16, 2011

They Gave Their All Comments

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I may not understand the wars
Or the fields of rotting corpses

I've read all the poems
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Kaila George
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Marcus Mckinley 16 October 2011

welcome to the site. this is a very reflective poem. our history in any nation is seeded in violence unfortunatly. those who die never get to enjoy what they fought so hard for. you have expressed yourself well with this enjoyable read. thanks for sharing. line 25 chose = choose not sure if you meant dear or dare 2nd to last line

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