Saturday, April 7, 2018

They Don't Know, But You Comments

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They don't know what I feel inside
What I can see behind the clouds
Beyond the lights was a dimly lit thought
They don't know why I cry deep inside alone in the dark.
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Eden Orbista
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Nudershada Cabanes 07 April 2018

A beautiful poem Well crafted

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Thank you so much Nudershada.

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Lovely poem Eden Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Thank you Mario, Lucien and Rene, you guys are wonderful.

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Thank you guys.

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Thank you Mario.

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 April 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Eden. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Thank you Jazib.

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