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When I take my breath They don't identify that You are close to me, than My deeper pulses, oh my dear ....the utmost love....excellent expression

Cont....2 One version of my interpretation is what I felt like and the other one could be your lover is conversing with you and telling I am so beautiful that all eyes are on me and people are fascinated by my charm to such an extent that they don't see you exist or they ignore your presence.5 Stars

Another fantastic poem on love. We in human form have some inherent and inbuilt qualities we have conscience, which guides us to the right and the correct path, whereas we also have devil who try to deviate us from the correct path and love has to pass through this test. What others see in us is what they are hence time and again we struggle to make them realise what we are. This is a thought provoking poem and can be interpreted in different ways.