Friday, May 4, 2007

They Didn'T Know(Child Abuse) Comments

Rating: 4.5

I got dressed and went to school one day
and there was no smile on my face
but the teacher knew something was wrong, cause i didn't want to play
because my happiness was gone and pain took it's place.
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Tracy Rollings
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Shane Clawson 09 August 2007

both narrative and rythmic. good poem. keep writing!

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Osceola Waters 04 May 2007

Now Tracy you can write something happy, and keep writting, you have a locked up inside, let the good and happy things be created, use your immagination you can go any where be any thing your friend Osceola

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