Sunday, March 29, 2020

They Complained Too Soon Comments

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When you carried your dreams in your heart
Little did you know that they were to be crushed in the start
Your body shook the whole world when washed ashore
The innocence in your cute face and the body with vim
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Balambal Suryanarayanan
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Dr Antony Theodore 30 March 2020

I wanted to kiss your sweet pale forehead As your lifeless fingers curled mine and your soul leaped out instead My heart shattered into pieces as I sat there Numb and speechless hoping you would nictitate and giggles that tear. very fine poem. a great philosophy. tony

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Thanks a lot sire. I am 'umbled

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