Thursday, July 2, 2009

They Came, They Saw, They Killed Us All. Comments

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The dawn had come and all was right. They roamed the streets, they prowled the night.They came in cars, and guns they held. Our homes we hid, the house became a cell.
We had no rights, no dignity, no wealth. We hide in the shadows, we clung to our health. Three nights had gone, three mornings passed. We were shunned and beat, forever harassed. They shout, they hit, they throw us aside. They stripped us of possession, our honor, our pride. The sky shined no longer, it reeked of sorrow and sin. The death caps showed hatred with a sinister grin.
Loaded into cattle cars, seventy men stashed, seventy men pressed so close, seventy men clashed. We were fuel for their fires, we were told every night. We were birds without wings, eager for flight.
Shaven and clean, dressed in odd clothing. Hungry and cold, the children are moaning. The fire crackles, the bodies burn. A hellish heat, your stomach churns. I was weak, lanky, and ever so thin. I was fuel for the fire, it burns my skin.
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Shaven and clean, dressed in odd clothing. Hungry and cold, the children are moaning. The fire crackles, the bodies burn. A hellish heat, your stomach churns. I was weak, lanky, and ever so thin. I was fuel for the fire, it burns my skin......i really bleed along with u dear. it is so aastonishing and dreadful...10 read mine i am disgrace and come home

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~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ 02 July 2009

Man Collin, i dont even know what to say. That waz really good. It may be sad, but it gets right to the point and its speaking of truth. I would reccomend this to anyone! It waz well worth the read. Id give it a 15 if i could. Good write.

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Jazmin M. Baird 02 July 2009

That is very very good! ! ! !

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Collin Hagan

Collin Hagan

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