Thursday, March 10, 2016

They Called My Poems - Diamonds, Comments

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They called my poems - diamonds,
Although I get no money,
I don't read them to audience,
I don't know why I write them.
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Liza Sud
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Daniel Brick 10 March 2016

There's a perfect word in English for your poem: I-n-g-e-n-u-o-u-s. It's a very positive word and too precise to be considered flattery. It means honest, truthful, open, without any holding back or concealing or deception. I read that Panteleon (spelling?) after whom the Church on Franklin Ave. is named was a martyr. A martyr is an extreme example of an ingenuous person. Facing certain death, a martyr can only be very lucid and committed. And honest with her/himself and the world. (See message box for my humble commentary)

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