Tuesday, June 6, 2017

They Call Me Illegal Comments

Rating: 4.2

They call me illegal
unwanted in the eye
blue as the sky
but only seeing my colour
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Leonard Dabydeen
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upendra majhi 14 December 2017

The word racism, uttering it with disdain is not enough.Intolerant mind searches for a ground to hate.Either race, caste, ethnicity, wealth-status, colour, gender, region, language, even shape and size of nose, Therefore, we need to report all aspects of the intolerance so that planet becomes a better place to live.Congratulations.

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This is a beautiful poem. i like the photograph too. Colour discrimination still exists though the modern world speaks of progress. I most heartily agree! The trees always welcome you with a smile no matter of your colour. Well done, Leonard! Congratulations!

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Bharati Nayak 19 June 2017

Color of the skin can not be a measure of man's worth.Racial discrimination on the basis of color divides society.Why do they not understand that we are all human beings as trees to a forest.Very nicely penned poem.To quote a few lines- - - I am like falling rain I run in gutters I run in trenches I put a smile on earth trees and plants they welcome me.

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Pilar Mogollon 19 June 2017

Thank you, that is a wonderful honest piece. Powerful and poignant- the poem and the image.

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Anil Kumar Panda 19 June 2017

Disease that is spreading in the society more and more. Though we have grown up in intelligence the curse of racism is still rampant in society. An eye opener. Liked it.

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Denis Mair 19 June 2017

THEY CRIMP MINDS WITH HATE/ EVEN FORNICATE/ THEIR SOULS TO FLAMING RAGE...Indeed, there is something obscene about demonizing the forsaken children of the earth, pretending that bad bile is the wine of life. You have a beautiful vision of the cast-down ones. Being cast down, they have sympathy for all fragile, tender lives. If life glorifies naked power, that is no kind of life. The smile of the cast-down ones brings hope.

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Savita Tyagi 19 June 2017

Excellent poem. Every day a new face of hate is born. A new shape a new form. Nature is our hope and our well wishers and guide always coming to our aid in tough times. Congratulations for member poem selection of such wonderful poem.

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Rajnish Manga 19 June 2017

Powerful commentary against racism. Nicely articulated. Thanks.

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Resh Kav 19 June 2017

I put a smile on earth... Excellent

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Richard Wlodarski 19 June 2017

How beautifully you've summed up that Man discriminates and Nature does not. Congratulations on a well deserved Poem Of The Day.

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Tom Allport 19 June 2017

a poem of truth on what is going on in a world full of man made boxes into which depending where you come from? we are all destined to be put in one? ............wonderfully written L.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 June 2017

Discrimination is illegal in the sight of God because the Almighty lets the rain fall to all as He allows the sun to bring warmth to all.... a perfect 10++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST and EACH PASSING DAY....Thanks, Leonard👍👍👍

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Simone Inez Harriman 19 June 2017

Lovely heart felt poem Leonard. Congratulations for poem of the day :)

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