Friday, January 11, 2013

They Are Inseparable! Comments

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They are inseparable, the moment he reclines,
Not only on the bed, also on the couch and seating,
Not only in the middle of the dark nights,
Where the star attached to the sky prop,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Heather Wilson 11 January 2013

I smiled at the punch line, how right you are, how to seperate a person from their snoring? many have tried and failed, nice one.

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Dave Walker 11 January 2013

Sounds like me and my partner. A great poem.

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