Saturday, July 3, 2010

These White Walls Comments

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i open my eyes to see everything pass me by;

i see my dreams
and my mistakes.
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Samantha Collins
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a very beautifully crafted poem, an insightful write

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Unwritten Soul 08 July 2010

wow, it so real...I know some people claim that they know us but for the they actually know how we look like and name but rarely understand what actually we are... Even your shadow and mirror cannot understand u although it imitate your act very well...The true u will be seen if u swim through ur own dream, believe yourself and try the best, ignore the bad words...but never use bad words or act badly because we know our self, being bad is like to be like them, instead u must water people with love and friendship then u find a ray of hope even sometimes heart still be broken...Tryst me..nice written poem friend!

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