Monday, August 3, 2020

These Thunder Storms: (July 31st,2020) Comments

Rating: 5.0

These thunder storms strip away
All flowery illusions. They are
Nature's's harsh antidote for
Idle hours spent basking in the sun.
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Dominic Windram 05 August 2020

Thanks Shaun...there was a mistake in the final line which I have corrected.now reads.mortality rather than morality...very different meaning and undoubtedly more negative!

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Shaun Cronick 03 August 2020

Finally I can make a comment for some reason the box wouldn't let me. Anyway, a positive poem albeit negative ioned and charged poem which states its case in how fragile we all truly are.10++ and many thanks Dominic for sharing your poem of our place in this natural world.

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