Friday, November 4, 2005

These Tears Comments

Rating: 4.5

I hate that these tears are something you made and i have to live with in my eyes.
I hate that that you made me fake a smile, a laugh.
Because of you i try my hardest to forget everything.
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Heather Noble
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Amanda Lukas 04 November 2005

Good stuff, Heather. I especially like the line: '...the closest thing to perfect but the farthest thing from me.' Shadows often fade to expose a view of beautiful blue skies! Best Wishes, Amanda

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Heather Noble

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