Saturday, June 6, 2009

These Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

My eyes are bloodshot
from the tears that
have fallen this day.
Though my irises
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Heart of Ice Die Die Die
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Jona`e Levett 23 July 2009

this was a very good read.

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Broken Heart 22 July 2009

honestly.....i loved it: D 10+

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Oh your tears should not fall even though they are innocent.... beautiful write. i suggest to read mine'Cry not' and feed back from u... keep it up

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