Wednesday, September 2, 2020

These Starlit Secrets: (July 27th,2020) Comments

Rating: 5.0

These starlit secrets
Travel on the summer wind,
At late evening time.
They move through the air,
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Shaun Cronick 12 September 2020

And I hope I spelled grammatical right.

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Shaun Cronick 12 September 2020

A worthy poem that is deserving of another worthy reread and worthy full score as well. And Dominic there are so called people/poets/life's idiots on here who couldn't find their grammatical a r s e in the grammatical dark.

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Shaun Cronick 02 September 2020

Dominic nicely imagined and very well written poem delving into one's consciousness. A true breath of fresh air poem to inhale. A full score and many thanks. Take care and I wish you well.

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Dominic Windram 02 September 2020

To the ' Professor of Poetry', whose ill conceived comments I have just removed from this page, the plural form is correct as it refers to 'secrets' which are ' starlit' (note that is an adjective) and not 'stars'. Please take my advice, because I think you need it. Why don't you enrol on a course in basic English, before you make more egregious comments on other members' poetry which you are often inclined to do?

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