Sunday, December 13, 2009

These Paltry Lines Comments

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These paltry lines cannot bring you back
Into the halo of this street lamp outside my door;
I thought I had words but even they
Slipped from my grasp and went away.
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Rani Turton
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Ranjit Ravindran 13 December 2009

These lines are not paltry, they have deep meaning. Keep on writing. I love your poems.

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Daniel Kempson 13 December 2009

Lady your poetry has always shined and always will 10 Daniel

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