Wednesday, August 19, 2020

These New Hymns Comments

Rating: 5.0

These new hymns speak
Of miraculous moments
In time, but somehow
They stand alone; detached from
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Shaun Cronick 19 August 2020

The Immaculate Conception, the dogma and mantra of the Roman Catholic Church and such a brilliant way to end your fine poem Dominic. For you are planting in the reader's mind the sublime thought of a question and an answer too. A poem to make one think and for all the right reasons. Beautifully written and presented. A full score and added to my favourites.

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Paul Brookes 19 August 2020

The last line is a killer, Perhaps these hymns are Immaculate conceptions. Maybe all poems are hymns and all hymns poems. A poem full of lyricism and grace enjoyed it.

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