Saturday, April 25, 2009

These Lips Have Kissed Comments

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These lips have kissed the eyelids of the morn,
painted bright with rays of light newly born.
The gold twist of warm incense splits the sod
with wondrous waves of wind - the breath of God.
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Linda Marie Van Tassell
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L.J. Mooney 25 April 2009

This is a very good poem. Which is a rarity on this website. You describe the things you love and have touched in a very eloquent way. I especially liked the phrase 'kissed the eyelids of the morn.' Thank you.

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Linda Marie Van Tassell

Linda Marie Van Tassell

Lynchburg, Virginia
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