Friday, February 26, 2016

These Is The End To Settle Us? Comments

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Is this or is this my last? I am hungry, hungry of an clear answer.
fate-where could i find my fate. Aha! Maybe it was already on an island and its waiting for me.
lastly but not just so sure.
Yes, we are but we àre not either.
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Claudge Ben-at 26 February 2016

Who cares, if this been done on purposes so long as you get my point here. I wrote poetry, verses, phrases, that you cannot be able to read if using only your head. Read through the heart not to the mind. It is where you understand the troubles. But then i am misleading the words. Sorry, cause there is no brain foundin my head. Like the whole brain. So my head is really empty. Do you get the point here mr. Juan? ? ?

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Juan Olivarez 26 February 2016

The syntax in this poem is terrible, as is the spelling. the general order of it is chaos, some boundaries need to be addressed.

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