Sunday, May 21, 2006

These Hours Comments

Rating: 5.0

wrapped in a camel colored
sweat-shirt with snaps
the ugliest thing i own
but it’s soft inside
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Joyce Chelmo
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Duncan Wyllie 30 May 2006

What rules! this one has just scored a ten if points matter, sleep well my darling! , Love Duncan X

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Hugh Cobb 21 May 2006

Dear Red, I get this one. I'm much the same, by nature I am a night owl and am more comfortable going to bed at 3 or 4 am than at a 'normal' time, whatever that is! The poem itself is well-written and offers readers the insight into the psyche of the night owl. Fine write. Best, Hugh

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