Thursday, September 14, 2017

These Guavas You Have Offered Comments

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Oh dear fellow teacher, oh dear friend,
I am your guest today, I am in visit,
I know you are hurry to greet me soon,
Boon you have gained from God in life.
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Aniruddha Pathak 19 October 2019

Yes indeed, the food is not so important, it is the love and care shown behind it, Reading this I'm reminded of the words of Krishna in B Geeta: patram pushpam falam toyam.... As to what ye should offer to me, a leaf or flower is enough, just a fruit, or nothing but water... if offered with love. This lovely poem reflects this sentiment.

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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Guavas are tasty. I love these. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Valsa George 22 September 2017

We visit our friends to sit and chat, and to renew our friendship from time to time! During such meetings, food is not the priority....! Some people won't be available even to talk in their hurry to prepare a banquet! Then the purpose of our visit is squashed...! Having some home grown fruit is very enjoyable! Guavas are so lovely! Even I love guavas......ripe enough and crunchy....!

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Hazel Durham 21 September 2017

True friendship is like healthy food it helps us in emotional nourishment and makes us happy to have a bond with a friend, to bare our souls, to ask for advice, to give our own wisdom and to care for one another! Beautiful, uplifting poem!

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Susan Williams 14 September 2017

Our food is of spiritual nature free from spices, Good for meditation is pure food that vibrates- - - - - - - - - - - - - - You so often have a stunning observation in each of your poems that touch on our soul's relationship with God. I love these lines. I must asmit though that I have never eaten a guava... Thanks for the good read, my friend..

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