Thursday, June 11, 2009

*these Green Hills (School Assignment 8th) Comments

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<font color=darkviolet>6: 30 am
I’m perched among the branches
of the old oak tree.
Through its drooping limbs
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Jane Meyer
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HaZeM PaKKaR 17 August 2009

i adore this piece.. especially: '' as I watch a world unfold before me. I can feel the magic, pulsing through YOUR POEM ''.. and the timing(6: 00,6: 45,7: 00 am) was a great idea.. it was more like a scenario.. you simply could mingle reality to fantasy.. nice work & well done! !

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