Sunday, April 8, 2012

These Fears Washed Clean Comments

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These fears washed clean
the dreams sought of tomorrow,
but who is to deem
for these dreams have melted to sorrow.
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Daniel Warner
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Josephine Collett 20 May 2012

This is beautiful and sad and a little mysterious Daniel. I can't believe you are only 16 - your writing has a depth and maturity. I hope writing helps you to come to terms with your life and turn it around. You definitely have a creative gift and I look forward to seeing your work develop.

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Daniel Warner

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