Monday, September 21, 2009

These Eyes Comments

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These eyes have seen more than his mind can take,
as such the images confuse, anger and instills hate,
he tries to relate,
to open the envelope and not seal it,
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boy nameless
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Tai Chi Italy 22 September 2009

Not could be reborn, but CAN and WILL be reborn! It is amazing what a little eye surgery can produce in the quality of our lives. A wonderful expression of your new found insight. Smiling at you Tai

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Marieta Maglas 21 September 2009

wonderful metaphorical poem, well written...........10

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