Thursday, July 3, 2008

These Children.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

These children,
round-eyed, absorbing
what the world offers them,
or silently wandering in their own
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george george 06 October 2009

I like this one, it captures the special nature of childhood.

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Rahul Sharma 27 September 2009

simple and shocking, , , , , , , , , , , but lovely

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So true Paul. The round-eyed children did it for me as it evoked innocence. Not always wiser too, depending on conditioning and what life dishes out. I found this thought provoking.... Karin Anderson

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~ Jon London ~ 12 April 2009

Its a constant worry as a parent, how our little ones will grow and learn ready to be set free into a world that may not even be here for them to become the very best they can be, but the most of all i hope they live to be healthy and happy in all they choose.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 23 December 2008

a lovely poem on children- the world only steals them of their innocense-10

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Susan Jarvis 07 July 2008

A sad but true philosophy - the first two lines create an affecting image. This is poetry liberally embellished with wisdom. S :)

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