Tuesday, January 10, 2012

These Chains Comments

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So close, yet so far apart
Lay our needy, wanting hearts.
Trapped with chains, and locks of steel,
Escape seems too far from real
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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2019

Hearts trapped with chains of love is good and freedom thread motivates mind. Iron chains break after rusting but love chains remain in emotion. A brilliant poem is beautifully penned.10

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Deep Mukherjee 15 January 2012

like the spirit of freedom in this poem! !

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Makhosonke Dhlamini 15 January 2012

Great poem I'm love the two last line and again great poem. Thanx for sharing

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Makhosonke Dhlamini 15 January 2012

I m romantically involve with the last line, good poem.

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Binish Cd 15 January 2012

really great words from a young girl.....! and the fragrance of these words remember us the beauty of FREEDOM. great write.10

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