Theres A Monster In My Bedroom Mummy.. Comments

Good poem, very shocking ending---Melvina

Scared the living daylights out of me, Maria. What a wonderful little poet you are. Sleep well, my lovely. Love, Fran xx

AAGGGHHH! ! What a shocker! Right up until the last few lines, I was thinking...oh...what a nice children's poem. Not! It has great shock value though.

I'm with Vincey on this one. Full respect to Maria. I'm giving her 10. Gina.

Devishly dark twist at the end of the poem, I like the way it starts of as a possible Humorous childs poem, before throwing you into a Dark surreal image of a murdered girl. There is also something about 'peter cried wolf' going on here. send my compliments to Maria Vincent