The lier does not sing
The lier awaits hes target
The target is set on me
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I really like the poem, it's hard to describe but I really like it.
i liked it you must have put alot of effort in for this so i give your poem, your effort, a ten
Emmajoy, you are developing your talent. 'The knowledge of you with another behind my own flesh' is very poetic and mature. Keep writing! Thanks.