Sunday, December 21, 2008

There Will Be No Saving Tonight Comments

Rating: 4.8

The lier does not sing
The lier awaits hes target
The target is set on me
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Fading Heart
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Jim Norausky 23 December 2008

Emmajoy, you are developing your talent. 'The knowledge of you with another behind my own flesh' is very poetic and mature. Keep writing! Thanks.

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Elsa Wallin 21 December 2008

I really like the poem, it's hard to describe but I really like it.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 21 December 2008

i liked it you must have put alot of effort in for this so i give your poem, your effort, a ten

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