Tuesday, July 28, 2009

There Was Those Times Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cloaked in moonlight,
Wrapped in wind.
Silently strolling down the midnights beach,
There's no need to talk,
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Jane Z
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saltedpeanut blank 04 September 2009

i like this one

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Adi Cox 05 August 2009

What a stark contrast. To be cloaked in moonlight, to not need to talk, then to suddenly find a shockwave. Maybe the volume on your alarm clock is set too high.10/10.

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Anjali Sinha 31 July 2009

good write 'paralysed beyond belief'' -10 anjali

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Ted M 28 July 2009

A beautiful dream, with flowing thoughts. Well presented. 10+++

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