There Was Stillness Comments

When heart is burdened, words are silent, yet in mute language it can communicate and a bosom friend always understands it and allows it to spill over to be purged and cleared like an azure sky after the rains! ! Beautiful! !

Beautiful poetry, full if imagery and depth of thought.

silent hill and love to move to hill again

silence yet engraves art of love in eyes heart carves the curve craving within, most ingenious yet metaphoric write,10+++, thanks for sharing

Amazing! A very deep and touching poem that is also well penned and thought provoking! I love it and like its metaphoric poetic style! 10+++ Your are very talented and have great feelings! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Your friend Romeo from New York City!

Thoughtful and emotional rhapsody, blended with rich imagery of nature...hill and pine trees...waterfalls ending in a ditch...weeping...how you felt the bleeding within...all welling up in your 'bruised veins'. Good flow, good write. Looking forward to read more of your work. TFS. ~Leonard Dabydeen