Wednesday, February 16, 2022

There Was An Abandoned Ship. Comments

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At the foot of a vale, where the sun's about to go down.
And the lake is enclosed, through the thick woods.
Where birds call forth mighty oaks.
And the heart emerges from the mouth.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Ricky Mangathen 18 February 2022

Life on earth aptly described.

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 17 February 2022

Abandoned all will be after the time coming to the end line-

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Poetic Sky 16 February 2022

Wo0nderful poem. Imagery, story and flow is impeccable.

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David Wood 16 February 2022

I wish I could swim in our rivers and lakes but they are so polluted. As a former diver, I dived on ship wrecks, aircraft and even helicopters that came down Every one had a story to tell.

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Gordon Walter 16 February 2022

Body itself leaves the ship abandoning the life (boat) Nice philosophical poem with great imageries.

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