There Was A Time Comments
THERE WAS A TIME
There was a time I fought the sun,
I looked unto it's face and spat on it
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7/27/2025 10:52:11 AM # 1.0.0
Reminds me of the song ALL MY LIFE popularized by AMERICA...Rated 10+++++ You may visit my HEARTACHES WILL NEVER LAST, TAKE TIME TO THINK, and BECAUSE I LOVE HER...Thanks....