Tuesday, June 18, 2013

There Was A Time Comments

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There was a time when time didn't matter,
The time before I met you;
I never cast a backward glance,
Each day was just time renewed
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Lora Colon
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Khairul Ahsan 17 July 2013

An excellent poem that touches our heart. The first and the last line are the treasure of this poem.

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G.R. Gaus 14 July 2013

Hi Lora, good to here from a fellow Missourian. We cannot stop time. Failure to act may make any action irrelevant, because the time to act has passed. He who hesitates is lost.

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Heather Wilkins 23 June 2013

a beautiful love poem. each stanza well written

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Valerie Dohren 22 June 2013

Beautiful but sad - time steals so much from us all, but in its fullness can also bring things to us which we never expected.

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 June 2013

beautiful love poem.the moments of love must be cherished for ever.liked it.

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David Wood 22 June 2013

What a beautiful poem, I loved that last stanza, absolutly beautiful a good 10.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 June 2013

Wow such a marvelous recollections poem penned in an admirable way! U end it superbly with d treasure box take. Hey n gr8 to know u grow lavender n honeysuckle, mom grew jasmines.

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Kavya . 19 June 2013

an excellent poem Lora! liked it v much........we have no control before time, we have to bow before it and act as per its rules........there are times when we used to b tired running after time, then comes a phase in our life when we have plenty of time n we find ways and means to pass it! that life! a very lovely write about time linking it to your beloved.

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Dave Walker 18 June 2013

A great poem, like it.

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Lora Colon

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