Friday, December 24, 2010

There Used To Be A Worm Comments

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There used to be a worm,
In that apple that you hold.
So please try not to squirm,
And please don't think I'm cold.
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Juan Olivarez
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Smoky Hoss 06 May 2015

I love it! Great humor... I can't help but laugh! Thanks!

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Pranab K Chakraborty 24 December 2010

The conception of two half of an apple reminds me another poem of Nazim Hikmot (Turky) . {please you consider the spelling of poets name, if not correct] But here in your writing...... 'THERE USED TO BE A WORM, / IN THAT APPLE THAT YOU HOLD'............ very superior by its inner sense which really irritates readers world of belief and trust. Beautiful. I will not forget these two lines at all. Thank you very much. Regards, pranab 10

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