Wednesday, December 4, 2013

There The Red Sun Rises Comments

Rating: 5.0

There the red sun rises
High o’er the hill
There the red sun rises
It bends men to it’s will
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Tim Vallie
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Hazel Durham 10 December 2013

A sense of menace as the red sun rises as the day will bring hardships to be endured to many. As it's powerful rays show up clearly the destruction of the night before. A powerful write with great rhythm and flow.

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