Sunday, April 30, 2006

There Sits A Lonely Girl! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 4.5

There sits a lonely girl
don`t know which way to turn.
She wants to turn to the right
to be near here man.
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Tracey Collins
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Goldy Locks 13 May 2006

this one is good, Tracey. i think it illustrates very well the internal struggle a woman feels when she is debating whether or not to go or stay - she knows it would be best to leave but every thread in her heart is pulling the other way. endearing & desperate - makes the piece lovable.

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