Monday, December 5, 2016

There's Still Sunshine Above The Clouds Comments

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If you look through the clouds
The glare is there
Manifesting its heat
Upon the cotton air
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Khairul Ahsan 19 August 2018

A nice poem on clouds. I think the last word of the last stanza should be 'dissipate' instead of 'descipate'.

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White Tiger 09 September 2018

Thank you Mr. Khairul for catching that error. I have fixed it.

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