Wednesday, July 5, 2006

There's Something I Have To Tell You.... Comments

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There's something I have to tell you,
And it doesn't come easy to say.
I pray it doesn't make you blue,
To discover my parents feel this way.
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Lesa MRK
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Ah, well now, you told it superbly. This is resonant to many, I think. A well-crafted and heartfelt piece indeed. Well done.

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Chantelle Clark 05 July 2006

very nice read, really liked it, very nice rhyme. Good flow. Very heartfelt. Keep up the good work.

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Lesa MRK

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