Thursday, August 9, 2007

There’s Someone In My Head And It Isn’t Me Comments

Rating: 4.3

There’s someone there behind my eyes
Who I have grown to despise
He’s with me wherever I go
When I say yes, he says no
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Bharati Nayak 27 January 2017

The suppressed anger sometimes become uncontrollable and explode.The bullying a child faces in the school may make him too timid or a rebel in later stage.The school administration should keep watch over children who bully weaker children.

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Emancipation Planz 12 October 2007

Superb... from alpha to omega... I could not help but be entranched from behind those eyes. Back home again and can definitely relate to the title, in th for 10! .

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Random Crap 04 September 2007

Tis an amazing poem. It reads really well. I like the way youve drawn on a lot of experiences that are caused by this one person inside your head. Well done!

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Frankie Stones 21 August 2007

I love this poem it flows so well and i loving the rhyming it suits your style very well

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Brian Mills 09 August 2007

very nice write....ending was awesome! ! ! ! i like the anologies that you used as well...10 hands down! ! Brian

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