I can see right through you
whether you like it or not
you put on your little show
like your the hottest of the hot
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I like it. Well writen. I've writen a couple to the same effect myself. 'Have You Ever Wanted To Be Somebody You're Not? ' and 'Unmask' to name just 2.
U Took nice theme.. N beautifully balanced it with words. I want u to come n read my poems and give your views for it..