Thursday, April 15, 2010

There's A Time Comments

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When life is timeless,
Love is loveless,
life feels like lifeless,
everything become useless.
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DICKSON MSETI
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Ken E Hall 24 April 2010

Prayers come first not the last then the full life begins.... the poem expresses sadness but the grasp of real life is for the taking...thoughtful poem Dickson regards

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Kolawole Ajao 23 April 2010

Rhyme and rhythm are the bedrocks of the sweetest music. This is a sweet song. Continue!

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Kee Thampi 19 April 2010

love is not such a cosey it is Godly not for to wrankle.. The soul needs to fly, the body resists being high, Heart needs to see the blue sky, True eyes feels shy. That Time, Politics can't convince you, Teachers won't teach you, Doctors won't treat you, Even chancellors won't abide unto you. When that time comes,

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Kudakwashe Roak Mutama 16 April 2010

sure man 'PRAYERS WILL'..... i really like the way you have shown that when the time comes nothing will help us and nothing will really make us feel better except for prayers... keep penning

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