Tuesday, March 6, 2012

There's A Garden In The Desert Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's a garden in the desert
Remote and tiny sphere,
Blue and green oasis
Hospitable fine and rare.
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Danny Draper
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Valsa George 31 August 2012

Oh what beauty, what mesmerizing charm both in theme and in diction! !

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Walterrean Salley 29 May 2012

Perfect description. What an utopia. Makes one want to be there. Beautifully written.

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Douglas Scotney 19 March 2012

things lovely in themselves anastomose to create a lovely garden. Read After 'A narrow girdle of rough stones and crags'. Human blemish enters the garden.

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Ken E Hall 12 March 2012

Now this is my cup o tea worded with clever simple words with a real garden of Eden from your pen...regards

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Valerie Dohren 10 March 2012

A beautiful poem Danny, food for the imagination. You may like to read mine entitled This New Eden.

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Danny Draper

Danny Draper

Kiama, New South Wales, Australia
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