*there's A Fire Burning In My Eyes* Comments

i think can u edit ur poem fire in my eyes like this fire of my eyes will burn down around then look into my eyes with the fire on the ground burning with hate just like an empty plate.fire in my eyes will cook everybody which makes to remain only a dead body fire in my eyes which makes yell for help so if u feel to control my call the fire engine .

Nicely done, Allen. Congrats on having it chosen as poem of the day!

You must still be very young!

A beautifully crafted inspirational poem. Congratulations. Thanks for sharing.

Even the impossible can be done! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

yes it is really a very beautiful poem.

Great poem!

Nice poem. Congratulations to you.

Such a powerful message, so very well expressed, such a great poem!

Pregnant with a passion that is both musical and motivational. Well done my friend.

Very optimistic poem...congratulations!

Awesome topic to write on... only a few things that I would have changed.(Maybe take into consideration the words used when in the context of the poem a little more)

Hi There, You asked for my honest opinion, I liked it. This is a good theme however I feel the idea can be refined, word selection can improve. It needs to mature a little in my opinion.

A very uplifting and inspiring write. Yes do keep the fire burning and never let it go out. The fire is a symbol of powerful energy. Also could be a symbol of youth and vitality. Very motivational. Congratulations on being number one in the poet world Allen.

What an amazing synchronicity that I am listening to To Dream the Impossible Dream as I read your poem. Your divine confidence is contagious to your readers.

Very strong feelings conveyed..Very nice! !

really inspiring.. great write

wow powerful poetry...10/10

wow powerful poetry...10/10

A motivational poem. A nice one. Thanks for sharing.