Monday, September 8, 2014

There's A Box Comments

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There's a box I bolted my sorrow
But hear it knocking kicking to be out
I keep it telling I'll free you tomorrow
His prison he will break one day no doubt!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Valsa George 12 September 2014

There's a box I bolted my sorrow It is a great idea to bolt the sorrow in a box, though chances are there that it may break free! But for the time being, it won't pester! A great poem!

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Lorraine Colon 08 September 2014

Sorrow always manages to break free, but we must keep putting it back in the box. It cannot take control. Very good poem.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 08 September 2014

Awesome piece so poignantly scripted reflectively with sorrows being locked and may any time break open and be free........amazing.....pradipji........I liked it so much

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