Monday, January 23, 2017

There Out There. Comments

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There out there
they crowd the streets
and alleys and malls
and buses and trains,
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Terry Collett
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Nika Mcguin 23 January 2017

The element of surprise in this poem is amazing! I am so happy for the character in this poem. Although the way she achieved freedom might not be the best route, she did find freedom. At first I thought this would be another poem about being trapped in a crowded city but no, it was so much more than that. Great write! ~

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