Sunday, January 23, 2022

There Once Was A Bird Who Didn't Know It, Could Fly Comments

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There once was a bird who didn't know he could fly
He didn't even know who he was… there were no others nearby
But then one day, as he looked up at the sky
He saw birds, like himself… There… Way up high
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Joe Fraccalvieri
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Cute poem, Joe. I like it.

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Grammar Police 23 January 2022

Remove the comma from the title! It does not belong!

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Joe Fraccalvieri 27 January 2022

Actually, I'm not so sure about that: -)

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Joe Fraccalvieri 27 January 2022

How 'bout, 'there was a bird who could fly, but didn't know it! '

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Anon E. Mouse 23 January 2022

Monkey see, monkey do. Bird can, too.

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Joe Fraccalvieri 27 January 2022

Yes... And I see that you are a poet too.: -)

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